Monday, March 1, 2010

Student's Essay

3 comments:

  1. nice essay. I wonder if I could share that with my students. they are having a bit of difficulty with introduction and transitions. I think they might enjoy hearing from an eighth grader. What do you think?

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  2. I really enjoyed listening to your podcast. The student had a wonderful introduction paragraph. I knew exactly what the central idea was. The topic sentence was about what makes a good teacher. The thesis or the three reasons the topic sentence is true are sense of humor, being precise and clear, also making sure the students learn. It actually interested me, I guess because I wanted to know what students thought made a good teacher. Thank you for sharing.

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  3. You are doing an awesome job teaching your students. That was a great essay!

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